Black Poetry : Made Just For You!

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  1. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A novel all by herself
    Her title was, “Made just for you.”
    She dressed up
    To take you back in time
    On a journey into your childhood
    Where you would remember the excitement of what
    It was like to receive a beautifully wrapped present on Christmas day
    Likewise she got her nails done because these were
    Her hand tools used to carve into your back
    The history of the heat of the moment
    To mark the one she claimed lover
    Whereas she lotion herself with oils
    So that she’d slip away like the river salmon and you’d hastily grab for her like
    The black grizzly just to try to hold on to her a little while longer.
    Lastly she grew her hair long, dark, black and beautiful
    So that when she’d been finally caught
    She could curtain out the world
    And there’d be nothing else left
    But her and you.


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    Thanks for your support & Write on my Brothers & Sistas!
     
  2. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is such a beautiful display of admiration told quite eloquently. A beautiful, beautiful piece.
     
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    Oh that's so sweet

    She was made just for you
    And noone else will ever do
    Many try to fit into her shoes
    But they'll never be succeessful
    For the master had you in mind
    As he sculpted her to perfection
    Placing your missing rib inside her
    She is your one and only soulmate
    She was truly made just for you


    That was a pretty piece cuz. :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesomely done just for that very someone .
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really luved this piece.
    Checked out the link too
    and feeln' that "Ghetto"
    I need to get your book on my shelf.

    Nicely done!!!!!!

    Much Luv!!!
     
  6. nevar

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    i think that was made all for me. love this hot tantalizing write. always love always. hey my brotha come check a sista out on myspacenevar112 and leave me a kind word. posted a little pic of me had to get my sunday dress on. and ya know this man!!!!!!!!!
     
  7. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Word of Thanks to my Peeps!

    Hey yawll preciate all the gravy feedback. Rich thanks bro its always good to hear from ya and flow on brother. Thanks asimplepoet and I'll be checking out more of your tight flows too so stay tuned. Mad thanks to 4everluv, Phenomenal woman, and never as well. Definitely nevar I'll peep your my space I know your space is just steaming poetry. All yaw'll take care and Thanks again! Peaceout. T.E.
     
  8. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)

    I was feelin this right here. Flow on poet i'll be lookin out:)

    Much Love

    AM
     
  9. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yea ill be checkin for more too..this was a cool peice....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece unfolded just like a book, and you know that, you must... I'm sure glad I read this one, for I would truly be missing out, if I hadn't. Lovin your creativity poet.
     
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