Black Poetry : ~MaddRapper~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Apr 11, 2001.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cherish the poetic flow
    Sounds of a distant lova
    ~Freestylin~
    Durin the rainy storm

    Still till this day
    I show my appreciation

    Watchin you
    As you make life ~sound~
    So simple

    Drizzle down the Atlantic Ocean
    And wash your face with the grace that God has given to you

    I see you timid and shy
    But then again irresistible

    Bold and with a lot on his mind

    100 dayz a thousand yearz
    Seem to come and go like the wind

    Engraved in my heart
    Still walking down memory lane

    You think people don't see the ray of life that's inside you
    But are watchin you from behind

    Admiring that artic flava and savor
    Every morsal you drop into those ink filled pages

    Every script you portray
    Dominates a character
    Sultry parts and dramatic ends

    Enfatuation
    Still you remain

    Spirit so vivrant and free
    Alive and awake

    You touch me
    And I just want to have something nice to say
    About you

    And adore cats who come like you
    After and before you

    To show handsome face
    Of African ~American~ men

    In a color picture
    Dictates this sense of human

    Takin care of business
    Saturated with pastures of steel waters
    Eluminating the skies with
    Calm vurture of string guitars
    Play their lullabies

    (Secret Admirer)
    P.S.*~ Stay as sweet as you are!

    Desert Storm
     
  2. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww.. sis... this is a beautiful tribute.... im sure he will love it...

    8th!
     
  4. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you!

    Yeah,I'm hoping he gets here so he can hear what I have to say... Thanks Amun-Ra for your positive input you are very intuitive...I like your spirit. Thanks 8th wonder it's always a joy recieving responses from such a beautiful sistah. Thanks a lot. I really appreciate it!
    Desert Storm
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DESERT I LOVE THIS ONE GIRL

    DANG i'M FLATTERED YOU WRITE ABOUT ME LIKE THAT IT'S ALL KISSES AND GRAVY GIRL
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERY WELL DONE !
    MADD IS THE MIC WHICH HE FLOW
    FROM THE SOUL
     
  7. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well,you're kisses and gravy!

    ...In my book MADD,keep up the good work! THanks for peeping this one!
    Desert Storm