Black Poetry : Mad2

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticWhisper, Sep 30, 2003.

  1. PoeticWhisper

    PoeticWhisper Member MEMBER

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    Looks and shakes my head,
    Try to understand this pain,
    Trying to bottle all my emotions,
    Before i go insane.

    You tell me something,
    Then you can't make up your mind,
    I thought you were the "perfect" one,
    Then GOD sent me a sign.

    Nobody can never be perfect,
    Like a person can't love me,
    Like a person with no legs can't walk,
    Like a blind man can't see.

    It open my eyes to see,
    This is what i call,
    You can never love me,
    And your not perfect at all........
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the perception of this...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin the perfection in this scribe
    u express dis so well and full of truth
     
  4. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much love for this...sometimes we all of a sudden wake up and see stuff...it really hurts but, i mean we gotta see it...much love.
     
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    nice scribe
    feeling the emotion
    let it flow
    Peace
     
  6. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm very interesting, I had to read this like 3 times, tyte flow.