Black Poetry : Mad

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticWhisper, Sep 24, 2003.

  1. PoeticWhisper

    PoeticWhisper Member MEMBER

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    It makes me mad to think about how we of a race of people are treated,
    Seated..........
    In the back of a place because people don't like the race;
    The color of skin you're in.....
    Shouldn't make a difference
    Because as I see it
    .........we're alike
    It makes me mad to think of dumb folks;
    That can't get pass it
    That we're the same
    And the hoax is.........
    We're different
    We should live together in peace
    Can we do that at least........
    So we can all hold hands and say.......
    We did that ****!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of peace & love & bond

    welcome poeticwhisper ya kin now :)

    these are some of our continue struggles we face
    about a color a name the race
    the great mighty creator created me this way
    black , beautiful & proud .....the facts is still out there
    we now making a stand to change it ,
    let the movement continue in this type of struggle
    happy u join us with ya voice to make us stronger !:D
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    Welcome, happy that you, have joined us!
     
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    welcome to destee:wave:
    nice flow
     
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    I hear what you're saying.. I feel you.. thanks for sharing..
     
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    PoeticWhisper
    Welcome to Destee...

    To a place to gain perspective.. to show what you feel and see. Scribing with love with some of the best poets I have met in my life..

    Those that play the thing of race. Can't compete so they cheat at the start line. They fire the gun.. if not at us. Into a bucket of water so we don't know the games began. So if you find they move the line. Refuse to play their game. You won't stop living. You won't stop breathing. It's payback in your name. Don't you hate when they move the line.

    Especially when you are about to score. How the slow piston on the screen door moves faster when you want to enter the store.

    Well all they have is the blood soiled past.. to try and rub in your face.

    They still don't have a clue about living as a human. In this race.

    Their nose isn't higher up in the fresh air. When you look at them it may seem.

    It's just they are trying to gain some fresh air. From all the stinch they bring.

    Peace.. and much love
     
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    welcome poeticwhisper....and i feel you totally...i'm mad about that too...and as i read your poem it brought a lot of things to mind that i hadn't even realized before. thank you for sharing that. much love and respect.
     
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    PoeticWhisper Member MEMBER

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    thanks everyone
     
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    nice...
    WELCOME!!