Black Poetry : Ma Steed

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  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A fine Arabian carries me down a twisting road
    The journey is long and heavy is my load
    The horse steps surefooted on the path
    Upon approaching holes he seems to laugh
    No reins are needed to direct his course
    He instinctively knows which paths are worst
    The rhythm of his heart comforts my ride
    I feel as though I am one with his stride
    He bears me regardless of class or destination
    This earthy walk is his only mentation




    .........................JUst cause you asked....thankx
     
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    Go 'head poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thunder thunder !!
    dis peice has much depth within
    u go poet!
     
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    thankx you two..
     
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    well what can i say? i hope everyone comes across that kind of horse at least once in their life ;) this was good as usual!! keep on blessing us!

    ~Kim~