Black Poetry : ma come back

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  1. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They say it will be alright
    but how do they really know?
    It's been five months and tears still drop from my eyes,
    i dont think they know what this pain feels like
    Ma come back
    my heart aches night after night
    my eyes water day after day
    afraid that i will never be loved the way you loved me
    you are what i lived for
    Ma come back
    things aint the same
    they seem worse
    all i do is cry
    without you i'm afraid to live my life
    i need you
    Ma come back
    they say everything will be ok
    but how do they know
    i dont think they know this pain feels like
    i cant eat
    i cant sleep
    i cant love
    Ma come back
    i beg you
    my heart is turning cold
    come back please just come back!!!!! :cry:
     
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    awwww no ....you lost youre mom....



    sis, brother.....



    aww let me hug you......:heart:


    i,ll pray for you....





    we meet again

    we meet again in sion..




    aww i feld this....










    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much strength and love to you.....





    you will be loved again and you will feel her love always in youre heart..



    and you are always loved...

    By our father.....



    and there will be others to in youre life or who will come.





    you gonna be alright.....






    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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    The ache in this felt so raw. Reminds me of how I felt after my mother passed years ago. It takes time, much time to go on with life. It won't be the same, but a mother would want her children to continue to thrive, even without her. Prayer does help. Flow on, release your feelings.
     
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    I know this so well and felt the deep core of your emotions
    keep prayer as your healer and guide
     
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    Aw, this poem just broke my heart. I'm sendin you love and prayer.
     
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    Pain like no other you have ever felt or ever thought you could bear?
    Shocked and broke down and your tears have tears, nothing makes any sense and then everything is more important now, your visions have changed.
    Engulfed in a everlasting disbelief that cradles you in your every breath, so hurt you dont want to breathe, i know, i know how you feel, i am so sorry for your pain, i know how you feel, i just lost my momma, my beautiful, wonderful mother recently and i needed god to bring me back and i still hurt and i feel like she was taken from me, you will hurt for ever probably, but it does get easier to bear, i decided to keep my mother alive inside me and i talk about her all the time and i keep her alive like that, please understand that you might not want anyone to help you right now, im here
     
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    ...this one cuts like a knife
    in ways that words cannot convey
    if this is real...my prayers be with you

    felt this...
     
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    peace Guttapoet,

    this cuts sharp indeed......................i felt your pain all the way thru!

    Peace to your Earth, for one to cry for a love one like this I know on her entrance God said "well done"!

    peace god.........
     
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    re: Ma

    This poem brought tears to my eyes because I know your pain. To lose a
    Mother is the hardest thing one will go through beside losing a child. Sweetie, you are in my prayers.