Black Poetry : M...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blaquebutterfli, Sep 3, 2003.

  1. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many nights I dream of lying in your arms
    and letting you rock me
    until all my bruises are forgotten the past
    removed allowing me to live
    in a present far happier than I've imagined
    curiously I wonder if you'll be my
    ever after.
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Short but sweet. tight flow and I can relate
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was on hit ......i felt it within
     
  4. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true - thanks

    $$RICH$$ - thanks, brah...any compliment from a woman's dynasty is heartfelt and well appreciate
     
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    Nothing like that hug thing. Be will to give and you will recieve. A hug a smile the things you need. If you see walking by. Grab my hand and let them fly. Hug me girl. I love that squeeze. I bear hug you back if it will please. Soothe my worries relieve my brain give them hugs like winter rain. Keep giving me hugs. Console me. Hold me a little. While then you get to share my smile. Hush subdue my cares and woes. Squeeze me tight curl my toes. Thank you for that hug my sweet. That was so nice. I'm lulled to sleep. Keep flying blaquebutterfli
     
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    nice and short
    to the point feelin you
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gurrl i use to wish the same thang...well put scribe my sista :)
     
  8. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sister triniti, i'm still wishing gurl, but ain't it great that sometimes it does work out right? i keep hope alive
    one day.....

    angel, yeah sometimes short is best

    HODEE - don't go falling asleep on my now! not unless you plan to keep me wrapped in that hug all night, lol :flirt:
     
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    many say they leave
    but they will come back
    cause the world is a circle
    and that is
    a fact.... liked your vibe.:love:
     
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    Wow.......out of all I've read today........this one shot
    straight to my heart..........powerfully emotive wrapped in a
    small poetic package!

    Very nice!