Black Poetry : M-E-L-T-D-O-W-N ~

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Meltdown
    Got to get with it
    Before you quit it
    Deep down here to stay

    Low down
    Laying on the nitty-gritty
    Come now that ish again?

    Way down
    Making a living
    Praying sinning

    Black child
    Inside the man

    Erstwhile
    Never believing
    Now we're seeing

    Our
    Minds
    Are blown ~


    Darryl Abdu Omari :terrific:
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this blew me into the reality of da meltdown