Black Poetry : Ménage à Trois

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  1. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What do you say?
    Are you up for it?
    I consider myself to be a progressive woman.
    I’m not tryin to fulfill your fantasies,
    I’m tryin to fulfill mine
    But I need your help
    I can’t do this all by myself.
    That’s funny my brother, what you have on your mind
    I was thinking of a threesome of a different kind
    The kind where our minds, bodies, and spirits are joined on the astral plane
    Don’t just enter my body, enter my mind.
    Ease your way in slowly, probe gently, leave your thoughts behind
    What am I thinking about now?
    Awaken my desire
    Tell me I’m beautiful with your heart and not your hands
    Massage me with your telepathy
    With your pure white-hot energy
    Warm my skin with the very essence of your presence
    Use those oft forgotten other senses
    Inhale the scent of me, breathe me, take me in, all of me
    Listen to the sound of my exhale, the beating of my heart, the pulse of my life flow
    Memorize everything about me without using your eyes, just know what goes where, here and there
    Feel me without touching me, magnetically pull me close
    Taste? There’s time for that later, but first, get to know me
    Heal my spirit thoroughly, handle with care
    Try your best not to add new damage there
    Tread ever so softly on this soft sand
    It’s so easy to sink and drown in an ocean of past emotions
    Casually discarded by the last visitor
    This temple of mine is not for you to pillage,
    But has lain dormant in waiting for you, so that we may begin our own African village.
    So what say you?
    Are you ready for this adventure to begin?
    If you’re really good at it, maybe we can do it again.
    :blowkiss:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwww yes ! i'm ready and willing to do it again
    this was awesome
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I second $$RICH$$
    This is awesome. Thought provocative and deep. I was sweep up by these lines.

    "Heal my spirit carefully, handle with care
    Try your best not to add new damage there"
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay, okay..you get 3:spinstar: and a:bowdown: for this one, tight piece indeed.
    Then give your own self a standing ovation for the thrist of pure unconditional love.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Napturally:
    Sista you wrote the he$$ out of this piece.
    Awesome scribe sista.

    Much luv
     
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