Black Poetry : LYRICS:Keep On Creepin'

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  1. naija-man

    naija-man Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Verse1:You think I can't see, you think I'm that ' blind
    But I know all your games, i see all the signs
    your coming home late, around the hours of 3,
    You just slide into bed with out kissing me
    When something goes wrong you give me the blame,
    Cursing at me, saying my name in vain, slinging out words of pain

    Chorus: Baby that's it.... goodbye girlfriend,
    Don't act like it hurts, don't even pretend,
    I'm sick of all the games and all the lies
    Wipe away those fake tears form your eyes,
    And just keep on creepin' with all them other guys,

    Verse2:Many dirty images, in my head
    you and other men, in our bed,
    Kissing other guys with fake love,
    Letting them embrace you with a fake touch,
    But you ain't playing me you just playing yourself
    I know I'll be happier with someone else,

    Chorus:Baby that's it.... goodbye girlfriend,
    Don't act like it hurts, don't even pretend,
    I'm sick of all the games and all the lies
    Wipe away those fake tears form your eyes,
    And just keep on creepin' with all them other guys

    Verse3:Now your alone, and there's no one to play
    I'm moving on now , gurl get out my way,
    You ain't gonna play games on me today,
    Your nothing 2 me, and that's all I gotta say.

    Voice:"Well gurl, you've messed up now, no more chances, no more fake sorries, no more games, I need you 2 leave and give back my keys, and get out my house, I don't like trash lying around the place, I don't care about you anymore, you can just keep on creepin' with them other guys.(Chorus softly playing in background fading away)
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice, i could hear the music in my head. much love to you for this.
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: Welcome to Destee's

    Nice lyrics

    thanks for the hit preview :)


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was a poeticly tyte drop
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey brotha u gon drop this over the mic for the family or what? :)
     
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    Great lyrics, reminded me
    of Dru Hill's, somebody's sleeping in my bed
    not the lyrics but the emotion and
    deep story line...
    this was definitely hot
    wish I could hear it put to music
    Great piece!
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwwwwwwww yeah!

    I can hear Ruben Stoddard or Gerald Levert singing this one so
    succinctly like only a deep but tender Manly-man can do it!
    This was soooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooood it hurt...
    Loved it!
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE! :grouphug: :grouphug: FROM DA TRUE BLUE LADIES!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lyrically saying it's past time to move on...nicely written.
     
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