Black Poetry : Lyrics Defeat To Kill The Masses

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  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    March with death
    Aint no reason left
    I breath till I breath no more
    Peers see my eyes
    No that dreams have dreams no more
    When I see its my time to die
    I might just sit in a pool of my sins
    Cut my dam arms
    Bleed until I rinse my fear
    Cleanse my soul
    Death take hold
    No angel wants me
    Scared I might loose my soul
    Jehovah witnesses telling me which way to go
    I close my door
    I light my square
    I sit back down
    I bend my cap
    I look up high
    Hope the Lord dont hate that
    Its crazy
    When I march with death
    I see demons and thorns
    Razors that cut my chest
    Tell me whats left
    Help me I CANT breath
    Im the one pulling your sleeve
    Lord can you hear me
    Please
    I use my lyrics to defeat
    The evil within
    The evil takes over
    Then I see a true image within
    A moment of silence
    When I preach from with in
    Never felt a pain like this
    Coming to grips with HELL
    How can I avoide this
    Want to avoid this
    Was I chosen to die
    I need to ask myself WHY
    Why I put myself through so much
    When I was raised with two dollars and a nut
    I feel like I have been through enough
    To let my Lyrics speak
    To defeat the masses
    Thats trying to bring me down
    So to be honest
    Whats next for my guarded soul??
    Lord I am still asking
    Please dont leave me in the cold!!

    Sincerly,
    Tantrum "Last Of My Kind"
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I read this and felt all of it, this is an wonderful piece ...I like the way you layed it out, and beared all.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Hold faith keep ya eyez on the sparrow
    surely your be answered and comfort to warmth

    this was outstanding had my head spinning......
     
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    phat joint son...
    keep bringin da fiyah...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Queen
    I tried to spill my soul
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Brothers $$RICH$$ & Khasm
    I appreciate the support
    The Midwest movement is alive & well
    I see much Love my fellow chitown Brothers
     
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    Wonderful.
     
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    this was deep tant continue to climb:climb: to be the best above the rest. flow on tant.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:kiss2:
     
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    Had to show some love again.
    Still feeling it.
     
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    The Lord sees our sins but also knows our hearts, I felt the emotions spill to the page.
     
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