Black Poetry : LYRICS BLAQUE QUEEN

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  1. naija-man

    naija-man Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Verse1:A beautiful body slender a slim,
    Full dark her, with mocha brown skin,
    Finely crafted and perfectly made,
    I wanna let u know, I’m glad you’re my babe,

    Chorus: You have change gurl, for the better,
    And i pray we will always be together
    The amazing power that came from your heart,
    You stuck all the troubles right from the start,
    And out of all the gurls that i've seen,
    none compare to you my Blaque Queen

    Verse2: From the time I messed up,And took my fall,
    You fought like a strong woman and gave it your all,
    I than you for forgiving me, from the cheating and lies,
    I realised the pain you felt when look in in your pretty eyes,
    I now give my soul and my life,
    And i ask of you to be my wife,

    Chorus: You have changed me gurl, for the better,
    And i pray we will always be together
    The amazing power that came from your heart,
    You stuck all the troubles right from the start,
    And out of all the gurls that i've seen,
    none compare to you my Blaque Queen

    Vesre3:I've stop my games, your tears were hurting me,
    And i know we'll be together for an eternity,
    All my words i use them truly,
    with u i have seen true beauty,
    And out of all the trouble that i've been through,
    I'm glad i made solved tham all with you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i was lovin it from the start
    wow!!!!
    u really drop this here every verse
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice
    i likes...good write
     
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    hearing the sounds in you flow...very nice..this was lovely
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte Write!

    Nice flow...and even nicer sentiment! Such wisdom for one
    so young! But, you made it and you got the hard part done.
    Now go and meet your destiny and be the very best that you
    can be!
    Blessings On Your House! :grouphug:
     
  6. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Sweet Truibute that Found & Beloved Love

    Nice Flow
    Write On!
     
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