Black Poetry : LyRicAL XstAsY (part 1 of the poetic trilogy)

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i looked at the stars
    tried to read their
    foreign text,
    they were my map,

    my freedom from
    under my burdens
    that consumed my thoughts
    they took me to
    LyRicAl XstAsY,
    he taught me release,
    it felt so good.....

    set off 10,000
    pressure points in my soul
    and let them amble into blu/black skis

    i was R.E.B.O.R.N

    new,
    metamorphsized
    into one that
    can hear the cries
    of others in their
    winter soliace
    see-sons
    drowning

    in tears left them
    and
    drained into their
    pillow

    :( i cried for them
    untill LyRic held me
    and whispered
    to write a message
    to humanity.

    in the form of VeRsE
    find her, and u will find
    the heart of man

    my journey goes on.....
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm lovin' this....
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks goldenone, glad u liked it
     
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    OOOO! Can't wait to lay my eyes on the resta this, lil sis. ;)
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ain't gotta wait long, it'll be finished soon,
    glad u liked it
    much love,
    -story
     
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    i like this
    cant wait for the rest
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its comin....
     
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    Nice very nice I love it
    jdj530
     
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    Very interesting begining.. (snaps)
    I am anxious to read more
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very beautiful flow ya pen is sweet ink to da page
     
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