Black Haiku : lyrical twist ease

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    steppin from the start
    blind from da dream in da mist
    hiding in plain sight

    lyrical twist ease
    place is da kiss of bliss
    undercover play

    its da blame game
    throwing fire losing control
    defeated player
     
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    Sister... I love this line...*impressive* metaphor

    feeling your flow Sister!
     
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    every toss blaming
    uncovers the hidden one
    eyes see blissfully
     
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    Blaming has no use
    so this game has no winners
    tip over the board

    Much love to you all. :peace:
     
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    The reason of reason
    Uncovers the point at hand
    undercover play

    but its been reveal
    as the light shines from above
    go head play ya game
     
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    try to understand
    why others do what they do
    ticket to insane

    I mind my business
    I refuse to speculate
    but I'm still angry
     
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    eyes watching the moves
    without knowing eyes see too
    hiding in plain sight

    but now its been made
    as eyes watch and try to find
    answers of answers

    lyrical twist ease
    place is da kiss of bliss
    undercover play
     
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