Black Poetry : lyrical release

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Jul 8, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel
    lyrical release
    is what i need
    as i sit here and write my piece
    mindz eye wandering
    to places of insecurities
    emotional furys

    so i pick up my pen,
    feelin the styles within
    and write of confusions,
    dellusions,
    illusions,
    sending, transending,
    a hearts mending,

    releaseing the expression.....
    relief from the oppression......
    and the rejuvenation......
    eternally fixed on the poetic process,
    to progress, and soar naturally,
    to heal,within myself,
    to live in this poetic release felt
    DEEP within my heart and soul
    to pour forth



    forever......
    :eek:
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You've captured the essence of your gift!
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks 1poet,
    poetry is a beautiful thing,
    just tryin to spread the love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was sweet indeed u posed a masterpiece
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...Story...u really got me feelin u on this one...Poet to Poet.
    The essence of the lyrical release! Great read!
     
  6. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    that was tyte...
    i feel you on da forever part
    peace
    khasm
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey the_story this is wonderful...flow on..loving it
    Peace
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx fam but sometimes when u goin through something you need a lyrical release
     
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