Khasm13 : lyrical punisher

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    staggerin but still smooth with a shrewd silhouette coming soon
    capillaries of captains came crude and was confused with a coon
    and male maggots maindated the mood while mentals were misused by the moon
    created from a crystaline cocoon...i crash catz and watch my concoctions consume
    back up and give me room...on a rampage i rip rhymes reducing radicals down to da romper room...

    no need to ask whom...

    doom
    is the reason why that smile got wiped off your face
    doom
    is the reason why i cannot stand in one place

    the tantalizing taste turns to tru terror not leaving a trace
    fool...focus on a futuristic face frowned from fronting flap cakes
    seeing slithering snakes sapping strenth so souls surrender to satan in haste
    go on golem...Gods grace grants guardians guidence thru the grissly gates
    psychic pulses pounds the purest passion predicting parallel prisms at a pronto pace

    no need to cover the face from the lyrical mace...

    lace
    is the reason why milk crates never go to waste
    lace
    is the reason why my mind marinates of the bass...

    on the next ish i set chase.....

    as the previous ish was erased....
     
  2. molasis

    molasis Active Member MEMBER

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    I'm really feeling your use of words ... you truly have some intresting thoughts bouncing around in your head. I look forward to seeing future threads from you!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved the alliteration khasm. Please give golam his ring...lol. Flow on brotha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heavy hitting this was creation at it's best !
     
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    ...this was a tongue twister on the real
    Cleverly composed and strategically prosed
    as only....You know :wink:

    Peace...
    Sage
     
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    You got a real ways with words Khas. Your a lyrical defender. By the way, Happy (very) belated birthday
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight, tight, tight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :hearthis:
     
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    WOw this was the bomb...I was tryin to read it but then I had to backtrack and slow down before I bit my tongue. But ur alliterations were off da chainz...definitely....another tyte write for the records!
     
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    Hmmmmmmm let me guess...you were listening to doom? lololol

    would i be right brotha Khasm? *battin my eyelashes* lol

    Mmmm smh when you get into ya rhythm there is truly NO stopping you

    I had to read slow as well LOL but I still say I can outtalk ya hehehe :D
     
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    holla at yo' boy Khas......................crazy tight!

    peace
     
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