Black Poetry : Lying Awake

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  1. Carameldlite

    Carameldlite Active Member MEMBER

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    I'm lying awake
    At this time of the night
    Sleep is calling me
    But its losing the fight
    I'm tired as hell but
    I'm all alone in this bed
    And I can't get these thoughts of you
    Out of my head
    I'm hoping and wishing that
    You might feel something for me
    Praying that one day this will be
    More than just mere fantasy
    So maybe one day
    This tossing and turning might end
    But until then.....
    I'm lying awake again
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing like sweet joining from da cold nights alone...tyte piece
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very smooth flow....Felt every word of that...
     
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