Black Poetry : luvsik

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hi-wa, Mar 19, 2002.

  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wish i could walk around the petals of
    gardenia and tell u how much i luv u
    sit on the edge of firelit candles to
    prove my handle on the relationship
    is tighter than any sailor's grip
    endure the harshest pain to make u
    really believe that pain is luv and luv is real
    i'm gonna strap my soul to railroad tracks
    and embed in the backs of minds across
    destee that l gotta luvjones for u that can't be tamed
    rope my neck after a carwreck
    so u can see that i'm crazy and(about u)-and i like luvpain
    drastic measures to give u the extent
    of my insanity/ how i frantically confess the
    truest luv for u
    then maybe i'll shoot myself
    up with 800 milligrams of
    expectations that i won't have
    to do all of this to prove myself
    to u.

    and maybe not
     
  2. Rashad

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    Nice flow Here!!

    I dig this here Poet!!
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ga_Boi.


    how come i hear Usher sangin' "you got it bad"
    when i'm readin' dis? :D probab-ly 'cause this
    heah piece speaks on somma dat crazy luv ****!
    & you know i likes it... a very very lot!! :D

    :heart:
    yo gurl!
     
  4. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx to:

    RASHAD for the input. glad u read and felt.

    SS: as always, glad u lak'd it. come on back ni, ya herd.
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi-wa,

    This is crazy tight dawg!!!!

    Creative mos' def!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  6. mizdee2002

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    i need someone to luv me like that...tyte flow poet!

    dee
     
  7. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ-
    preeshate the shout dog. keep showin
    luv.

    mz.d- there's somebody out there. in the
    meantime, thanx for the luv.

    -juanluv
    hw
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you got flava dun

    dis is some playa sh*t on the low

    dssNy
    you know i'm feeling dis
     
  9. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i 'preeshate the shout
    streets. keep readin me.

    hw
     
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    i would stick with the last line...but, hey, some of us take luv to the extreme.

    loving the flow of this.

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