Black Poetry : luv's race

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mizdee2002, Mar 21, 2002.

  1. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am running from u...
    please help me
    i want to stop
    i’m tired
    scared
    half out of my mind
    trying
    to get away from it...
    get away from you
    and this luv -
    consuming luv
    passionate luv
    ...frightening luv?
    the lose of control frightens me...
    i ‘ve got on my nike airs..
    but i’m the tortoise...
    i thought i was the hare!
    ' cause see, i’m moving in slow motion
    i wonder how does
    the fast forward button on me work?
    how about this -
    u give me a -
    ten minute
    ten day
    ten month -
    head start
    to train
    for u -
    your sincerity
    your kindness
    your honesty
    your unabashed manhood
    give me a little more time
    let me run a few miles more
    so that i can catch up with you...
     
  2. MsPoetic

    MsPoetic Active Member MEMBER

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    Sistah soul
    are you feelin me or what ? thanks for speaking for me !
    i'll tell you the story later

    poetic
     
  3. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ohhhhh....

    Sis, Lovin this!!
    Keep the flo!!;)
     
  4. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsPoetic & Rashad,

    thanks for the read and and the support, ya'll!

    dee
     
  5. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aw sookie sookie now!!!!
    I hate to say I know the feelin cause
    that gets to be so cliche at times, but
    that's all I can say right now...
    I KNOW THE FEELIN! :)
     
  6. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dee...

    :heart: it. I think we can all relate to that feeling. Mmmm Hmmm... :heart: it!
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    LOVEDIDED IT
    LOVEDIDED IT
    LOVEDIDED IT

    MAD FLAVA
    LOVEDIDED IT

    to the finish

    dssNY
     
  8. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sistah's....

    i know it can get to be a cliche Dani, but I'm so glad ya'll feel me and luv the flow...

    thank u Dani:heart:

    thank u, MsB:heart:

    thank u, Soja:heart:

    i luvs all of ya'll!

    dee
     
  9. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey!

    Stop Runnin! Why run? when you been wanting so long, praying so long for such???

    Pay me no mind im just talkin.
    Reas
     
  10. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas,

    it's just a poem, babeee! I don't have a Reason to run...but sometimes we(wymen & myn) do the Carl Lewis....just one blak woman's opinion...:kiss:

    dee
     
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