Black Poetry : Luving U 4 Tha 1st Time

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When we first started talkin on the phone,
    My heart told me u were tha one,
    We have good conversationz, speak to me all night,
    I started squeezin my fingers real tight,
    I felt blood rushin thru my veins,
    Slowly, i'm beginnin to feel tha pain,
    Gettin to know u was tha best thang,
    About time dat we get to meet face to face,
    U showed me what u was all about,
    Not a stickup, but i neva considered no doubt,
    I don't want this day to end like this,
    But i won't neva consider to rush so quickly,
    We had good times for the most,
    But your heart guided me to play along,
    So i went with tha flow,
    But only takin it slow,
    I'm not ready to leave,
    Until the day is over,
    Are u what i'm lookin 4,
    Do u know how to please a woman,
    I need to take my time,
    Only if it tells u are Mr. Right,
    Cause i don't wanna be alone tonite,
    Without luving u 4 tha 1st time,
    Now its time to make ya 1st move,
    Slowly kiss me softly on my lips,
    U got me in tha mood,
    I'm ready to play, ready to make ya body sweat,
    Hold me gently, i'm slowly feelin wet,
    I can work any way dat u please,
    All u got to do is just tease me,
    Up and down, and in and out,
    I won't stop not now,
    Water drippin down my face,
    How u like to taste,
    The sweetness of luv making,
    I'll neva 4get this nite,
    Luvin u 4 tha 1st time.

    AM:kiss:
     
  2. MORE

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    ooo this is raw for real, the fallen is good, now lets see what happens.....good job!:toast: :toast: :toast: :toast:
     
  3. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4 sho, i just had to spice it up a lil bit ya know. Thanks More:)

    1 luv,

    AM
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MmmmmmHmmmm :) lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well well !!!
    dis here is red hot and i need water the fire
    in this piece has a blaze of woooooooooweeeeeeeee!!!!!
    Da Eroticist
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this.....
    hot
     
  7. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks mzblkangel, rich, and triniti for tha kindful thoughts:)

    1 luv,

    AM
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet. I like this. This is hot. My favorite parts.. gots me up

    "U got me in tha mood,
    I'm ready to play, ready to make ya body sweat,
    Hold me gently, i'm slowly feelin wet, "
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh snap!!! AM, you snapped off with this!:hot:
     
  10. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was just keepin it real:)

    1 luv

    AM