Black Poetry : Luvin Me

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  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    converstion deepening
    problems facing me
    serving people without a fee
    locked door
    i've got da key
    i was blind
    but now i see
    carving our names
    in your tree
    all the feelings you've
    got for me
    deeper than the
    deepest sea
    bending down
    on one knee
    teaching me what i
    can be
    luvin you cost a fee
    but to luv u
    i've got to luv me :kiss:
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my god.....! if u only knew how much i could relate to this poem...good job
     
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    good poem.......yes u must love u first!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    serenti-poet

    This is a very beautiful poem.

    :D :toast:
     
  5. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fa all da luv ya'll givin me i weally weally weally appreciate it :)------serenti
     
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    That was nice. Love with out self love is disaster.
     
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