Black Poetry : LUV(Unsong)Hearts

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tis my chapter in grace
    for a love that was always placed
    two hearts crossed in da twist
    found each other mentally glist

    She was a heart of passion
    a love with sensual fashion
    one to behold like everlasting

    He was a heart of devotion
    a love lock and steamy explosion
    one that will move u in motion
    so i verse wit a notion

    As i place my script to pad
    she would be one my heart never had
    stories together to unfold
    a hope in love as we take a stroll

    From where and which she came
    for her love my heart want to claim
    as my arrow take it's aim

    Do i let her know what i feel
    take a stance keep it real
    she creeps unto me at night
    inside my slumber wit her sexy light

    How i lone to see da whole
    hear thy voice and fancy smile
    share laughter against da piles
    bridge da gap between da miles

    what do i say
    unsong heart
     
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    Yes, tell her. Always...always follow your heart. (smile)
     
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    Ya only live Once!
     
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    hummmmm
    good advice , I wonder will she hear me or allow my heart in

    Thankz ladies
     
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    Gotta plant the seed before you know if it'll be a good harvest! So to speak:)
     
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    O'yeah !
    right that's step one .....

    So forth da seed one plant
    unto da garden of hope
    water and nutrualize the moment
    as it grow so will thy loveth

    Caress da sizzle of passion
    and openly let da sun burst
    if i'm right my harvest will bloom
    and blossom unto me to behold

    Then my heart will sing in da glory
    of what creation luv has made
    by two hearts
     
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    She hears you, knows your heart and where your love lies. So let your love sing in the glory for she sings with you as you stroll.
     
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    wise beauty song of joy
    my heart beats like da drummer boy
    facing da bliss of glory in mind
    while softly whispers of love time
    soon it will be o-lay

    Thanx for da ensight view to how i should handle this
     
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    i wish you two love and light.
    (smile)
     
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    who two.....?
    unsong maze I just hit a brick wall
    while my luv spin in circles on call
    yet the heart is tamed not understanding da game

    who two again !