Black Poetry : LUV TITANIC (was she feelin me pt. lll

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Like da sea
    we rocked in waves
    her temptation
    was a romantic maze

    she was feel me !

    down da ocean line
    cross da big sea
    titanic main stream
    love clustered
    we grasp tight
    da sail of love
    da mood was right
    sunny misty air of breeze
    by night fall a summering
    please of a love so true

    she was feelin me
    i was feelin too
    all dis bliss
    in a sinking motion
    it was love not a notion
    gentle whispers heard cross
    da water shore line
    da depth of our hearts
    touched and a mesmerizer
    of hope flashed
    we knew at that moment
    out beings was rewarded
    and on da tip of the sail

    she was feeling me !

    when love comes let it in
    coz da heart that holds
    da mystery is a mind of thoughts
    as it send signs to the soul
    a emotional feelin cross da path
    in rapture .........da bliss sealed
    sweetly inside da kiss
    gracefully on the love ship
    the titanic ........:heart: :love: :heart:
     
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    da titanic of love is afloat
    as long as u continue to
    hold on
    soon we sail on the raffle
    to a small place
    and their we find foreverness
    yes my sweet chick
    hand n' hand
     
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    but did she feel me and
    da stroke of my love ?
     
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    On the open sea
    Waves rock and the moon shine
    Temptation was the starz
    Flowin in perfect motion
    Cross the ocean line
    Love grasped and held on tight
    Gentle whispers in da night
    Made the mood just right
    Da depth of two hearts
    In da middle of the sea
    Mesmerized with da touch
    Sinkin in slow motion
    Wine and dine in emotions
    Filled the bliss of da sea

    she was feelin thee

    Love floated in da door
    da mystery is a simple
    thought of two
    playin in da wind
    up above as the doves sing
    their love song
    ridin da winds of da sea…
    mystic magic flame in da air
    as da ship grace the sea of love
    da bliss sealed
    sweetly inside da kiss
    gracefully on the love ship
    the titanic .......
     
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    She felt you
    Felt you like a
    shock of electrical currents
    causing her to float motionlessly
    on an emotional shockwave of time
    She Felt you

    She felt you
    Felt the beat of your
    inspirations dancing gently on
    the marrow in her delicate spine
    She felt you

    She felt you
    she felt you as all
    has come to feel you
    And bask in the beauty
    of your wonderful words
    She felt you

    She watches silently
    in the ocean mist
    stunned with amazement.
    Captured in the splendor
    of your miraculous oration
    carefully not to disturb
    the path of your destiny
    While..... she...... feels .....you
     
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    Angel...............
    she was in waves
    of my heart floating
    endlessly to rapture
    of love we pose the
    dance under starz
    the love ship rocked
    water waves roll
    the two just dance
    in a romantic room
    feelin the bliss of
    love was sweet
    given a mass of hope
    it was the ship dat didn't
    wreck just a titanic motion
    she wave bye but did she feel
    my heart pulling

    purplemoons................................
    she was the sparkle
    the warmth of da ship
    we dance silently from
    jazz and romanticly
    touched as we sail the sea
    on the love bliss her notions
    was high she wave bye
    the destiny ride was long
    watching close
    i let a rose of token
    be fore her feet
    wondering did she feel me
    my heart speak

    Thankz sistah Queenz for the love here
     
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    NO doubt, Skipper, yours was a mighty shot cross her bow!
     
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    your welcome my dear sweet brother..much love to you :angel1:
     
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    indeed brutha 1poet
    the waves of her love
    was from the heart i pose
    thankz

    yes angel..............
     
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    Under the moon
    as the starz
    Sing….emotions felt
    As the windz blew
    Sea of bliss waves
    Of rapture…she was captured
    She will return
    To dance under the moon
    As your heart pulled
    Hers was pulling too
    And she will return
    For it was destiny….:angel1:

    i had ta read it again.... :spin:
     
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