Black Poetry : LUV SO TRUE

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have always dreamed of a love so true
    I had given up hope and then came you

    You took my hand and lead the way
    I’ve never once felt you would lead me astray

    For every moment I have shared with you
    I let my heart tell me what to do

    And nothing has every felt so right
    as when you hold my body tight

    I never knew the sky was so blue
    I see it now because of you

    You melted the armor that
    once protected my heart
    And I know that this is just the start

    of something that is real and true
    Because all I want is to be with you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I always knew of love
    never felt it until we hug
    through words uncompare

    I've been here times before
    but when u came it was my choice
    to listen and reason by voice

    Now i yearn to hear u speak
    til my legs becoming weak
    because i see how deep & unique

    Your love can truely be
    and what can come of we
    and from what i see sweet

    your like candy a chocolate bar
    a beautiful tender gentle heart
    a woman , soulful queen
    one my eyes has seen

    i know love is real
    from what my body & mind feel
    i let me self go to feel your inner core
    i know what lovin is for

    A beautiful u
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TO $$RICH$$:

    Physically you are so far way from me
    but yet so close to my heart
    I don’t understand how you became such a big part
    Of my days and my nights without being here in the flesh
    All I know is the time we share has to be the best
    That I have had in such a very long time
    When I think of you, because I always do
    It makes me smile so bright I Don’t understand it
    I didn’t plan it Just all of sudden while I wasn’t lookin
    You sneaked inside and some how found a place in my heart
    Now, every time I catch my self smiling its because of you
    I’ve never felt so good from a thought
    as I do when I think of you
    How I want to touch you, you touch me, kiss you, you kiss me
    The Beautiful things you say, the kindness that you display
    To everyone each and everyday
    But most of all how my heart beats so fast when I log on
    and see $$RICH$$'s red light flash
    They say out of sight out of mind, I beg to differ you see
    Because although I have never seen your face
    yet I feel so drawn to you in the most intimate way
    They should say, “I’m going out of mind, being out of your sight”
    I did not plan it I don’t understand it probably never will
    All I do know is I love the way you make me feel
    You……..My Poetic Lover


    (And yes I know yall watchin, lol)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaa!
    that was so sweet , warm and kind
    make my night light in shine
    from these words and deep mind
    i can't touch this lyrical rhyme
    and the rhythm of all time
    what i pose in heart
    is a love from above
    how i was mold to be
    so let me thanketh thee
    for such sweet release

    i will treasure this piece it touched me thank u .
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your so very welcome. I am blushing so much right now. :blush:
    I can't believe I finally wrote something you won't touch.

    Nothing but the truth...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yep ! i won't rumble this one up .....just adore inside it
    and enjoy the flyte of this piece that's sweet like sugar.
     
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    Beautiful and sweet:spin:
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cursed:
    Thank you so much cursed. I would have to agree.
    Much Luv
     
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