Black Poetry : Luv never die Rules of Engagement

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Grief & sorrow
    comes to pass
    love will forever
    last !
    individual feelings
    come & go
    but love seems
    to flow
    words vibe
    without an lie
    strolling from da
    scribe love runs
    deeper then u know
    given it makes
    a heart glow
    inside the moment of
    truth lay a blessing
    upon u as we build
    the steppin stone
    from maneuvering
    thrills dat chills
    love is pose'd from
    da heart this where
    we learn & start
    cascading, embracing
    is da sun
    without any reason why
    their will be dull & dreary
    days and slow haze
    but the happytime is their
    fear not to worry no need
    to glot no reason to exist
    coz love will never die
    inside da rules of engagememnt
    :look: :look: :luv: :look: :look:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It sounds to me like...love conquers all. This piece was tight and I enjoyed reading it...nice work, very nice work.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nicely done
    it speaks loud
    love will never die
    really enjoyed the
    ease of the flow
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz a million queentswana .....indeed it conquers all notions

    Thankz Angel .......the power love holds is great if u use it to it's fullest

    mind rumbling here .
    peace
     
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    the sun indeed feel s warm
    flowing in the calmness
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    thank u bluewater my mind just rumbling in da stillness
     
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