Black Poetry : Luv Him Right

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm gonna luv him right with all my might
    tonite tomorrow nite and every nite
    from now until the end of time
    his heart is 4ever inside my heart soul and mind
    i'm gonna take my time let the essence of my luv
    saturate inside and outside his mind
    spinkle drops of my sweetness
    spread layers of my strengths and weaknesses
    flo words and melodies from my lips
    of tenderness and sensual ness
    seal it with a kiss
    captivate his inner mental
    stimulate his chocolate physical
    feed his appetite for the taste of
    luv at its highest height
    a bond so strong and tight
    nothing can
    divide the oneness of
    this union
    inseparable
    connected
    intimately
    physically
    emotionally
    you and me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Luv her right

    Tonight every night
    deeply sweetly compassionately
    from da core of love
    her essence of warmth
    i wanna feed it as i caress it
    in da depth of morrow
    u and i untouched bond
    togetherness oneness
    a love sop physical
    as i send mental waves
    so intimately devine
    like da radiant sunshine
    i gotta luv her right
    wit all my might
    that she may come back
    and see the light of me
    and my unconditional love
     
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    If I let you come back
    Will you promise that
    No pain will remain
    Inside my heart
    Im tryn to luv you right
    Don’t want to get too
    Excited and be let down
    With a frown on my face
    Cuz I know your luv is
    So amazing and I don’t think
    I could take it if you break it again
    So if you’re not ready to win me back
    Please don’t tease me with
    Your sweet luv attack
    I would rather you just stick
    A knife in my back
    The pain feels the same
    But if you really want to luv me right
    And your intentions are more than
    Just some instant gratification
    Disguised in sincere admiration
    Show me in your actions
    and not your words
    because its hard for me to believe
    that all of a sudden you finally see
    what you should have seen before
    but if you have I will be waiting
    to hear you knock at my door
    Ready to luv me right
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da time is truely right
    my eyez have seen da light
    no need to put up a fight
    from this love of pure delight

    what seem broken never was
    as it mend from true love
    da pain flicked was deep
    but my heart comes to speak

    to wash away the past
    bring a new day to last
    to love her right
    by day and night
    caressin hope from da moon light

    there will be no gratification
    but yes the realsm of admiration
    from da heart pitted in da soul
    for one to cherish & sweetly hold
    to love right !
     
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    love how you put it down on this one sis. flo on love!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A heart and love that's so divine...it spills onto the Universe ...that's love Unconditionally!
    Great piece poet, as always
     
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    What impressed me most about this piece was the confidence behind your words, just matter of factly. Much enjoyed poetess.
     
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    Well said! I really like that line about, " saturate inside and outside his mind."
    That's was really good.
     
  9. 4EVERLUV

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    Hello beautiful sista queen:
    Thank you for the luv and visit
    Your words always mean so much to me.


    Hi sista watz:
    My words sound confident because
    thats how I felt. You ever just
    felt something inside and you
    just knew it was right. Thanks for
    the visit its always a pleasure.


    nevar:
    Thank you for checkn' out my flo.

    Emissary:
    I always enjoy it when you stop by. Thank you
    for your words of kindness.


    Much Luv
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Waiting to hear that knock at the door
    Want to shower you with kisses
    And so much more
    Are you really ready for me
    Lets create some beautiful memories
    Make it a reality
    For you and me
    Just Let Me…
    Luv You Right!!!!


    Hello $$RICH$$:
    Thank you for the flo. You know I always
    enjoy exchanging the poetic verse with you.:)
    Stay your sweet self.

    Much Luv
     
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