Black Poetry : Lust?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, May 23, 2005.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My mind takes dive,
    I forget to blink,
    As I begin to think,
    How it would be.
    You, me….
    Have I formed a fantasy,
    Or do I sin,
    Fall in,
    Into the trap lust.
    It must be iniquity.
    The things that were said,
    Places we tread,
    Against the wall,
    On the bed…
    Our carnal desires were fed,
    Faces turning red,
    As blood rushed to and from our heads.
    It was nice I claimed,
    Though wishing that you had no face,
    No name.
    Because when I race back to reality,
    And see the same face staring back at me,
    We might just start all over again…..
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Chastity
    What a wonderful
    Sweet and sensual
    poem, :)

    Peace
     
  3. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i liked the ending . nice drop
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u let this one ride sweetly love how it was crafted
    and the end was wow ! do yo thang poet !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To merely fantasize about lust, or give into it, many have contemplated this. Sensual vibe poet. Nice to read you again.
     
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