Black Poetry : Lust or Love?

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Should I choose to have lust or love
    Do I really know if what we share come from above

    Everytime when I want to see ya
    You run
    Everytime I want to get near ya
    You hide
    Everytime when the waters get a little rough
    You disappear

    The way you make my body cream I cant describe
    And I cant help but to tell ya the way I feel inside
    How you like to go deep in me
    Baby I sometimes cant help but to call your name
    Saying Daddy, Daddy, Daddy why you do me this way
    And with your innocent eyes you reply
    I love you
    But thats the Lust talking

    Should I stay for love
    Even tho we both have made many countless sacrifices
    Trying not to listen to other people advices
    Bout let em go
    He cant sho
    You the respect you need
    A man filled with greed
    Doesnt love ya
    Want you
    He just using ya
    And my heart broken head bowed down low
    My mind being weak is telling me which way to go

    My body needs him to touch me all over again
    My heart says to love him theres no if or depend
    Both I tell ya is a deadly combination
    One give you satisfaction the other can be a sensation
    Temptation

    Says to stop crying a River
    About the size of Denver
    Cause when its Lust
    Its goes Bust

    If its Love
    Then its truly from above

    And therefore I must ask myself this do
    I want him just for

    Lust or Love?


    To be continued...........
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    okay you went back to your old style.... And I was digging your new one so much.... But the difference between love and lust is the confussion that when men and women sleep together they think they are in love from missing that person just because they are not hear to share a special moment but not do to sex.

    Mannie
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    only thee can answer look into thy mirror
    forth the answer is there and inside ya heart
    and a little wit and you will know your path
    one whom can't respect and runs , hide
    and lie yet connect bedroom cling it's lustful
    but one whom can honor respect and stay
    through any weather it's love in heart from
    emotions expressed how u choose is what
    one will be ..........say it's love over lust !

    pt.2............. i awaits !
     
  4. nevar

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    thanks mannie um you sound kind of disappointed its going take me a minute be patient with me love

    and rich thanks for your continuing support
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    Love has staying power, lust is fleeting, can be confusing sometimes, but deep down inside, we know the truth. Enjoyed this piece.
     
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