Black Poetry : Lust N' Rust(spottieottiedopaliscious-Outkast-)

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby Phat skirt and Navigator shinin'
    Lookin' too good straight grindin'
    Thugs out locin',spittin' then chokin'
    Where ya'll wanna be?
    The party don't stop 'til 3
    Pop that Vodka we gettin' tipsy
    Look around you see them peeps

    While the pot simmers,I ponder thoughts to remember
    I go back to a spot way back this place called"Gettin' Hot."
    In the big city a place where skettles wear dukes to look pretty
    Me?Shawty went before,didn't leave 'til 4
    Met me a fine brotha, name was Mechia
    He was tall, built body moldin' the T-shirt
    Lookin' into his eyes my heart already hurt
    Conversation was sweet as grandma's sweet potato pie
    Thought of the consequences,jumped over the fences,and if it go wrong I gotta let the song cry
    His body scented with curve
    Trapped my body struck a nerve
    Platinum smile and diamond cuts
    Just blindin' my butt
    Highway speedin' forgot the results
    1,000,500...you hear my pulse?
    Didn't know all this would end so soon
    Woke up the next morning around noon
    Crazy how you thought this wouldn't happen to you
    Pop up pregnant,"what am I gonna do."
    Reminiscing the days
    You went outside to play
    Now you got a youngin' to raise
    Baby daddy still in his ways
    Things will never change
    Too captivated in the lust
    Now responsibility and you must.....
    Take upon yourself new pain
    Look up into the clouds...let it rain
    Water can't wash away ya sins like dirty water
    Atmosphere so much hotter
    While you try to play you're innocent
    Sit down and think a minute.......
    :wave:

    (not a true story,just like the song Spottieottiedopaliscious)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow..............
    now this was off da hook
    mad str8 tyte flowing in da mix
    work dat pen sistah
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich I will neva give my pen up for adoption it's my baby:wink: :thanks: :peace: :toast:
     
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    simply beautiful the pen of heart
    scribe the script given and forever hold
    da pen of mighty expression
    most welcome
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wink:THANX you make me wanna blow this forum up,but I must see the other talent in this room:wave:
     
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    [email protected] crack, i enjoyed this as well...keep it up...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol:Thanx Story for the love,buuuuuuuut DON'T YOU EVA CRACK ON MY BABY lol My pen is my child her name is Amil and her brother the pencil his name is Jalil:wink:
     
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    Nice flow!! :eek:hmy:
     
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    love the way you always seem to
    weave...*consciousness* into your work
    speak on young poet! speak on...
     
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    Makes you wish it took must longer than a blink of an eye to make a snap decision. You brought us all up into the reasons, well laid.
     
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