Black Poetry : lunch

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Apr 6, 2001.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    our communication
    is read between the lines
    we sit in open spaces
    cafe places
    we see the people that pass us by
    always the women catch your eye
    they see what i see
    that you're always looking for more

    they smile at you
    the same way that i do
    thrilled to have your attention
    they would settle for an honorable mention

    we get along and we harmonize
    over the various tastes
    the delicious spices always set before us
    different meals for different moods

    what do you have a taste for
    baby i always have a taste for you
    i could have you on my menu every day
    sitting in public places

    your smiles mixed with my
    honey mustard sauce
    make the whole meal taste better
    make the juices taste wetter

    eating in private spaces
    whether it's a dark mahogany booth
    or a well lit marble table
    i could always eat with you
     
  2. DeJay

    DeJay MEMBER MEMBER

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    tite

    I love it that is tite to death man will you post it on Black surge under speak up . that was tite tho
     
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    hmmmm, now i know why my luchtime is so special :lol: this piece i :hot: . i look forward to reading more of your scribes
     
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    Enjoyed This!

    i loved the way
    u drew a comparison
    between relationships
    and an afternoon lunch
    togetherness and
    a sense of gathering
    is what i get from
    this piece

    keep flowin'
    and welcome my poetic sista'

    :wave:

    pd
     
  5. Remby

    Remby Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Redlady,

    This is very nice and erotic

    Remby
     
  6. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS

    is sooooo what I'm talkin bout!

    thank you my sustuh! thank you! :D


    A
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    Yessss ... luv'n your flow!
    share more with us!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  8. verse

    verse Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you - the rushed version

    let me say thank you first
    lunch with you has always been more than
    just getting my eat on and quenching my thirst
    it's about relaxation
    comfort and conversation
    away from the office politics and
    stressful dramatizations
    of the daily 9 to 5
    we chew and chat
    about this and that
    the good, the bad, the nasty, the nice
    but to be clear -
    i'm focused on you, dont think twice
    about these wandering eyes
    like you said
    our communication is read between the lines
    often we sit and eat in silence just enjoying
    the company
    rarely is the female passerby i glance at
    as hot as the one with me

    a different taste, a different mood
    a different day, a different food
    to end this in a similar fashion
    i could always eat with you
     
  9. smooth

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    Time to eat!

    Redlady - Only a *real* lady could write a poem that's soooo delicious! I'm hungry now. Will you feed me???? :)
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REDLADY....

    very... very... nice indeed!!

    i'm feelin' the whole lunch date thing!
    & verse... the "thank you" was just as
    tyght... you guys vibe well togetha!!

    Welcome to the page my sistah!

    Peace&Blessings...
    Sunshyne~
     
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