Black Poetry : Lulu's Back In Town ~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Nov 13, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Melodious Monk chants everyday

    Challenging dumpster poetry

    Gulls refuse to shoo away ~

    Lulu's back in town...


    Critics don't never save the day

    Missing the boat capsizing waves

    Cat in the hat no mice can play

    Lulu's back in town...


    Phelonious Monk,

    Don't punk that way

    Channelling hipster poetry

    Something Dizz and Bird,

    Both liked to play

    Lulu's back in town...


    Darryl Abdu Omari :drums:
    aka 1poetsought 2004 ~ copyright 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey Lulu welcome back
    dis was awesome man...
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece made me think of the words to that song, which I couldn't remember all the words to, til I looked them up online...This made me think of a flava of an earlier time, flow on poet.
     
  4. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    you don't miss anyway
    but to give praise to
    monk and diz and coltrane..
    took you dead center
    better alive center
    lulu be checking you out...
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now i like this but i am a fan of yours..flow head this was tight
    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, Family of friends!
     
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