Black Poetry : ...lowest point...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sittin' here
    here in this room
    filled with fear
    here in this room
    scared to death
    of the future
    what if death
    is my future?
    i shouldn't be
    afraid of anything
    cuz i can't be
    afraid of anything
    i gotta live life
    to the fullest
    gotta love life
    to the fullest
    sometimes i think
    i have nothing
    but then i see
    i have something
    at least i can
    stand up and walk
    at least i can
    run and talk
    some people can't
    even do that
    and i can
    even do that
    and i have to
    i have to remember
    that i plan to
    always remember
    that i am in love
    with my husband
    and the man above
    gave me my husband
    my skies may storm
    all night long
    i may be forlorn
    in my song
    but i have to see
    i am still here
    things don't have to be
    so unclear...
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was written during the lowest point of my cancer treatment...i'm doin' better now, i had several surgeries which removed most of the cancer...and i look and feel good:Dlol....i'm glad to officially be back here destee fam:)
     
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    beautiful
    we all have fears but we also
    have something in each other
    that no one else have
    i think i wrote this right....
    love the flow and its pace....
    very nice said
     
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    I have to tell you how much
    i admire your strength and such
    the courage to go through
    but also to write so honestly about you
    your courage makes me brave
    on this poem i send you rave

    Most of all I send my love and prayers.
    Remember we at Destee care.
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot mzblackangel:)

    thanks cindy, i tried to write it in a way so that other people could understand, not just me...

    randee your words made my day...thank u so very much...
     
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    very empowering........you are an example to many

    wow...this piece was like a ray of sunshine bursting
    through a dark cloud.........

    such beauty!
     
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    i'm glad things are betta
    stay strong
    and let the negativity pass on
    peace
    khasm
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww thanks angelicsage:)

    thanks for the advice khasm...:)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wanna thank everybody who had me in their thoughts and prayers...:) it was greatly appreciated...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    truely i feel u and bless ya heart
    u been deep in this pain and may
    the comfort be unto u i feel u
    and blessed to have u so close to me
    ur alwayz be in my prayers my sistah
     
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