Black Poetry : Lowered expectations

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  1. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Knock knock-
    hi, remember me?
    I'm the one you always wanted to see,
    be with.

    My name was- is
    well you know my name.
    Same name, tho not the same old same.
    What about you?

    I know, well- I think
    that you are very much
    different than before,such
    a new girl. Do I know you?

    Do i want you-do I want to?
    Might this relationship revisited
    this time be so different?
    or will it dissapoint once more...

    Will you cheat on me again-
    Then if you do, will I cry,
    Say " F**k you, die" like i did last time?
    That was the only time a female brought me to tears...

    I promised- I swore
    To never feel that pain
    to always play the game
    and to play those in it before they played me.

    But I dont know-
    I dont understand myself.
    you've proven to be hazardous to my health
    But like a crack addict I still want more.

    Maybe-maybe not
    things will work out this time,
    maybe you will be mine- ONLY mine.
    For now though, My expectations are low.​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just maybe ..............i feel you here on dis one .....no need to be low keep ya head up high
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have a wonderful style poet. Keep them coming!
     
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    - well versed poet..................

    keep 'em coming!
     
  5. T}{e Trut}{ RyL

    T}{e Trut}{ RyL Member MEMBER

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    That was some good you know what right there. I like your style. We might have to collaborate some day.
     
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