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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Dec 14, 2007.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Some say that I am spunky
    Assertive! they always say
    They say they like my swagger
    In my business everyday
    They say "so and so did this or that"
    Say it had to be me too
    Why the hell you talking about me..
    Don't you have something else to do!

    Sunday you was in a temple
    Screaming and shouting like you changed
    As soon as whorship is over, same day
    You back to dogging out my name

    Monday is the first work day
    And you are at it again
    Yeah, your girl..... she told me
    But you are so naive, you think everyones' your friend

    Tuesday is the next day...
    My sweety he told me that you called
    And your suppose to be my people
    But your the first one to love to see me fall

    Wednesday I don't have the energy
    You really took it to my heart
    I guess you forgot that there is never anything
    That can be done in the dark

    Thursday your calling my phone
    Worse then some dude I treated as a catch and release
    Guess your feeling guilty
    Don't look to me for peace!

    Friday your all dressed up
    About to hit the streets.. you are on your own
    Cause many a Friday I watched you
    Ruin someones' happy home

    Saturday your stalking
    Went out got your heart broke up last night
    What goes around it comes around
    D***, you ain't neva gon get it right

    Next Sunday I decide.. and this is very true....
    Imma act like I'm still ya friend....

    You should keep your enemies close to you!
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you think highly enough of self, there's no reason to needlessly down another woman who has done nothing to you. But karma strikes again, I see. I liked how you posed the day to day cycle of this lost woman. Well written scribe.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Sister Miss Lady
    Very interesting dropped.
    This poem speaks to me of a deep thinker.
    It is always good to be aware of your surrounding.
    Be alert No matter where you are. Or who you know.
    Much love. Very Nice Read


    Peace~N~Love
     
  4. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was real Miss lady
    Laid out From 1st Sunday into Next Saturday
    smh......



    But This!!!
    I can relate all tooo Well
    Smh
    Keep the Flow Sis.!!!!1
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent!!! I hate to say that I know women like this...but what goes around comes back around...

    Really feelin' this flow!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    great write felt every word of this joint
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow do you that chick too. great description of an everyday matter. this was well crafted. I love how you laid at out by days
     
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    Wow! hee,hee,hee :qqb006: :SuN040: , umm, yea...:court:

    Order in the court! hee,hee,hee

    CASE CLOSED.

    felt this :whip: :whip: :whip:

    blessings.
    Desert Storm
     
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