Black Poetry : loving

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sahara heart, May 15, 2004.

  1. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have loved
    I can say, that once in my life,
    I have loved
    I have loved with all my heart
    and all the power of my soul.
    With the confusion of the world all around me,
    I was in my little cave
    In utter bliss.
    My heart swelled with joy
    and my smile was ever showing
    my eyes ever glowing
    opening my soul up to you!
    My entire being...
    loved
    you....
    Unconditionally...
    thought of eternity even

    Now, a lone lilly in the desert
    I found myself
    Too worried that I wasnt loving you enough
    And all the while,
    blind to the love
    I wasnt getting
    Irrational maybe, but
    Oh how my heart loved you...
    Dropped and broke!
    All this time,
    Loving you, wanting the best for you
    But never knowing what you felt for me
    Anger welled up inside of me
    But do I have the right to that anger?
    Why should I be angry
    when i have loved???
    So you didnt love me back....
    I know,
    One day,
    I will love and be loved back.
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved this piece especially the last line
    :wave:flow on:wink:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true dat indeed love will come as u love
    tyte drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked the way you flowed this, and the last line was a very positive one. And yes, it will happen.
     
  5. angelicsage

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    very nice
    emotively expressed
     
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