Black Poetry : Loving You

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  1. DestinyLove222

    DestinyLove222 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving You
    is a struggle I
    deal with daily
    Every morning I
    wake up to thoughts
    of you, wondering why
    I still love you when I
    am pretty sure you don't feel
    the same
    The love I have for you
    is like a tidal wave even
    when I try to avoid it
    its like it comes straight
    for me
    I want to stop but you are like
    a drug
    I feen for you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love take us through emotions never felt and have us dealing
    with things we thought could never be love is strong , deep
    and have you loving that one somebody .......well expressed !
     
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    BrownEyed Girly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Short but so true. I've been down this road so i feel ya. But keep your head up, it will be OK. In time.
     
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    Love can be quite intoxicating. Wouldn't it be great if we could know somehow how it will turn out. I hear what you're saying poet.
     
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    that word love is a trip i so know this emotions so well thanks for sharing.....Angel
     
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    loves misguided handlings of our perception
    leaving us in a world of devestation
    So bitter yet so sweet
    Every encounter you hope to leave not in defeat
     
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    Your addicted to this person huh, I know the feeling. Nice flow
     
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    lQQkin

    :jawdrop: Dang...You must have pulled this one str8 from my life...lol
    Nice job poet :great:
     
  9. DestinyLove222

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    Thank you all so much for the love you have shown me. I really appreciate it. I haven't wrote on this site for a while because I have been busy, but the piece "Loving You" was truly from my heart. This piece has been an issue that I have been dealing with for a year, so I decided to write about it. Most of my poems came from things I experience in my personal life, as I am sure some of the poets here write from their personal experiences.
     
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