Black Poetry : Loving you like this..

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by eternal, Jan 4, 2004.

  1. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am so in love with you
    That half the time I don’t know if I am coming or going
    The thought of you makes me smile
    And I always hope that we’d remain this way awhile
    I love your scent, the clothes you wear
    The curl on your lips when you smile
    The curly kinks of your hair
    I love your hands both gentle and strong
    I love how you make me feel like nothing is wrong
    I hate to be redundant
    But I can’t seem to say it enough
    I love your interior, exterior, and all your man stuff
    I know you haven’t encountered a love like me before
    And I hope that you can I’m all you need and more
    I care about you beyond belief
    Your woes, your troubles, your struggles give me grief
    And I admire you for how you handle your stress
    I just want you to know that I think you’re the best
    Even when we are on each others nerves , I find
    That in some beautiful way you still engulf my mind
    And sometimes I know that I don’t do everything you like
    And I wish you would change yourself to make it alright
    But then If you changed you wouldn’t be the man I know
    Would I even love the person you created.? So
    I have come to the conclusion that I am willing to take your perfections
    And your imperfections
    Your faults and your fears
    And hope that we may make this last until the end of our years.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes the vibes in dis flow
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feel ya love vibe of heart in dis piece
    flow on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very loving romantic flow.
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    eternal :) its so lovely to have u back home...when you gon come hit the voice chat up so we can hear u read this LOVE and bless us more :)
     
  6. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See, not that's what I'm talkin' 'bout.

    U gotta love the whole 2 love completely.

    Nice piece, sister, very nice piece.
     
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