Black Poetry : Loving you is like...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Nov 3, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when it came to us
    I had faith n trust
    i gave u my word and promise
    in return, i just wanted u to be honest
    but u couldnt gimme that
    i gave u consistency, but u didnt give it back
    chance after chance
    loved with commitment and romance
    i told you the deal
    i always keep it real
    but u were just looking for the thrill
    while u got other girls in ur grill
    i thought it was a true story, but i read wrong
    cuz i was fallin in love while bein led on
    if u werent ready, u shouldve said so
    because **** like that is just dead wrong
    im not mad becuz u tried to cheat me
    im mad becuz u tried to G me
    then had the nerve to blame me for ur crime
    couldnt even be original, had to gimme the same line
    im mad, but id rather laugh than cry
    becuz loving you is like...
    tryna catch a butterfly...
     
  2. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so catch up in the rush of emotions that you sent to us here, i'm loving it and everything and the ending couldn't have come out better than it did. do what you do---i'll always check out your flows cuz i know for a fact that what you say is what is the REAL DEAL you feel? i'm not putting n e body's else stuff to shame-----i'm just
    recognizing your name cuz you at the top of your game.
     
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    i like this piece..
    well posed girl
    keep them flowin...
     
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    I love how you flow such that...whomever this may be for, has not a chance of
    "wait wait wait let me explain"

    ONE LOVE.........................
     
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    wow
    tight flow
    strong
    Peace
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

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    this is tyte girl
     
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    oo, and the last line just grabs on. this is good, baby girl.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im lovin this:) hands down gurl you did ya thing on this
     
  9. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!

    thats madd love right there. I appreciate all of u so much. Yall always have something nice to say and always show love. Man... i got so much love for yall. thank u...
     
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    poeticlyspeakin

    You slammed on this one. :court:

    Hard to capture a butterfly. It's nice when they land. But the wings are easily damaged. Can't touch the wings cuz.. the covering on them be blown. So a butterfluy is destined to be on their own. Once captured you have a prize. Fluttering high up, over flowers and skies. Butterfly butterfly.
     
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