Black Poetry : Loving You Before My Breaths end

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who's to say how much
    how hard how long
    to LOVE you/how I should LOVE you
    ?
    The symbols of questions
    chase the days into the past
    with words that create
    their existence
    about How
    you and I
    are the answers to
    each other's prayers...

    we are the bridges between
    the sky and the varied colors
    that shade the masses with
    the Lords mood
    and are walked upon by clouds
    and dreams set out to seek
    realization /a birth given life
    by a faithful tear/

    it's sunny outside today
    an answer to a question
    about our connection
    we are a maize tone with
    a tint of orange peel

    ...I (feel IN You)R blanks
    and oblong thoughts with
    so much of me that all
    forthcoming prayers have
    an
    ans
    (her)
    before you
    close your eyes
    and speak them.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLaK-NeSs....


    it is definitely Your world BLak Man....

    on a scale from 1 to 10... you be... oops!

    i meant This Piece be a 12! :)

    One.
    Ga~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERB YA ON POINT

    TOP DA CHART A FAT 10+:toast: :heart:
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak,

    Heavy hittin' here bro!!!

    Dug it like that on the real!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  5. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Been too long since I've read you...I see you still bringing the thunder with the rain

    *blak-sun-showers*

    ;)
     
  6. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blak, i'm lovin' it! yes, indeed.


    ~~~lovepoetryspeaksloudandclear~~~
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok now poet...
    loving ya stlye
    this was tight an all dat!!!
     
  8. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't know where you are, but your pieces are amazing
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i absolutely loved this...
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak
    Putting into perspective
    Nice drop poet
     
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