Black Poetry : Loving, With A Twist

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Absolutely succulent, as I feed on them,
    taking them into my mouth,
    sending chills, that seem unreal,
    as slowly, I slide south
    to nibble on them from underneath,
    she smiles, senses my temperature rising,
    magnetism pulling me closer to them,
    their sweetness surprising me,

    time and time again,
    I let them slowly rub across my face…
    I’m lost in heaven,
    my mind spinning,
    that 1st shock, a feeling I can’t replace,
    or describe,
    the vibe, as I massage them gently,
    paying great attention,
    so she intently knows…
    they have my undivided attention,
    I separate them lovingly,
    dive in, let them slide across my tongue,
    I’m doing inner back flips from the
    stimulation,
    the rush, an aphrodisiacal sensation,
    nothing can equate my supreme elation…
    when I’m diligently devouring
    her words

    (and I absolutely love it)
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    niiiiice twist :D -7
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was twisted yet sweet and wit out a doubt
    ya absolutely love's it .......Tyght flow
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HAHAHA...! I LOVE THIS! niice.
     
  5. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks immensely for the responses....I appreciate them greatly.

    keep scribin'

    MJ
     
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