Black Poetry : Loving Thoughts

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She's thinking of him
    thinking of her
    as the intermingling
    of thoughts start to occur

    She...
    feels his mind stroke her face
    ever so gently, leading
    southward at a painstaking pace

    She...
    sighs when his thoughts hesitate
    in places where lovers' secrets
    silently resonate

    Thinking of her
    as strongly as he does
    she can't help but feel him
    because...
    he loves

    He's thinking of her
    thinking of him
    the connecting bond
    grows stronger between them

    He...
    senses her while she lays
    her presence down upon him
    in hauntingly hushed displays

    He...
    exhales while her thoughts steep
    wading in streams of consciousness
    the current so powerful and deep

    Thinking of him
    as intensely as she does
    he can't escape her grasp
    because...
    she loves
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thoughts to love by as they take u there
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz:
    I want to thank you for writing this
    beautiful scribe. Your pen is MAGNIFICENT!!!!!


    Much Luv
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indeed, Rich, thoughts such as these take one to such indescribable places. Thank you.
    It is I who thank you, 4Everluv. I am so humbled by you. Getting ready to read yet another of your wonderful scribes. :)
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    love

    on such a sensual picturesque spiritual level

    love the ride

    this is very professional stuff man

    you better stop playing around
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah Street So'ja, I guess I'd better. Thank you for your words brotha poet.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, its great to read your writings again... Very sensual drop!
     
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    Beautiful write
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, thank you TheOne. So glad you're back round these parts and posting your wonderful poetry.
    Much appreciated cursed heart, thank you.
     
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