Black Poetry : Loving the nothing into something

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love when we just do nothing
    Cause nothing with you is something
    And something with you is everything

    I love how we sit in the absence of sound
    Doing absolutely nothing but hanging around
    sharing a silent dialogue that is so profound

    I love every single second spent with you
    No matter what it is that you and I do
    Cause I just love you through and through

    I see that which is today unspoken
    Turning into everlasting vows spoken
    For its your hand I want to be holding at sixty
    And with you I want to be rocking with at eighty
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and this was so sweet and special to know and have when one can feel this makes it even more ova flowing
    awesome scribing well felt ....
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So nice.. love it!

     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    and you know i'm feeling this too

    you mean i can save some money

    lol

    naw but on the real

    this is some real ish right hea

    i really feeling this

    you know i am

    :love:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just simply adore "quiet times" too, cause even the silence speaks volumns.
    Great piece sis.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving the world piece, but I've got to comment on those first 3 lines too:
    In those 3 lines, you've poetically posed the ingredients that make up the glue that makes 2 want to stick together. Corny, I know, but, hey I'm diggin this write poetess.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    'tis a special love...

    that endures "uninterrupted silence," without thinking they have to do something to change the quiet time. BEAUTIFUL.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    asimple:
    Now this is so beautiful and
    heartfelt. You go girl....



    Much Luv
     
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