Black Poetry : Loving Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Feb 28, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving me

    Leg stretched over the side of the bed
    Magic things are happening
    To the numbness of my head
    So smooth, so sweet
    My love you attack
    Fixed are my eyes
    On the smoothness of your back
    Pearly whites upon me
    How you love me
    How you care
    In between each moan
    I gently clutch your hair

    Laying drunk from ecstasy
    I call your name
    Singing sweet praise
    Of your creativity
    An impulse moves me
    Compelled to leave this heaven
    I begin a reluctant squirm
    Lay beside me baby
    Share in the magic
    Loving you
    I’ll take my turn

    BE
     
  2. Cia

    Cia Member MEMBER

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    A request.

    May I love you magically like that?
    Holding your love, captured between soft full lips.
    Drinking your potion that's intoxicating.
    Drunk with your spirit entering me.
    Let me love you just like that!

    Yes, indeed Heartbeat!
     
  3. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what you say, now!
    BE...flow it!
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    trying to find the letters on this keyboard ...
    to type the sounds i heard ...
    after reading this peace ...

    can't find 'em ...

    so i'll just say ... you go Boy !!!

    :)
     
  5. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Be!!!!

    I'm chessing because you always say it so well and so smooth--a velvet hammer--strong without brusing--well done--Ra :cool:

    New column today--Lesbian Lovers :spinstar:
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayuum dawg...

    Was I lunchin' on your flowz?

    Tight!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis BE..... it

    da depth
    da love
    da heart
    da beat
    man u laid dis out on a wet blanket.........very nice flow:toast:
     
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