Black Poetry : Loving me with your fist....

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I use to say I wouldn't end up like this
    But then again one day I was hit with your fist
    I use to say oh no he wouldn't do that to me
    I begged and plead
    Slapped with your hand, hit with all your strength
    Praying to God saying, "I repent, I repent!"
    Never would I imagine you beating me
    Capable of knocking me out
    Sure my mouth is a little too much
    So what
    I never deserved your fist
    I didn't see this one coming
    My mouth numbing
    From the powerful slap he gave to me
    He sprayed me
    With his saliva from his mouth
    Bruises
    Black eye
    Cries
    Heartbroken
    Speechless
    Bloody
    But still I stayed
    He stayed
    Telling me to control my tongue
    Now give me some
    As I'm thinking did I truly deserve this
    Reserve this
    For another day
    Next day
    Couldn't speak
    Couldn't cry
    Bruised thighs
    Couldn't work
    Babies going beserk
    Because they don't know what just happen
    And a man with a lunch pail heading out the door
    How did I get to this point?
    How did I let my self be involved?
    How can I get this issue resolved?
    I love him, and he loves me
    He loves me
    He love
    Love
    Me
    He beat me, he beat me
    Beat
    Me
    Trying to put the beating blame on me
    I look in the mirror and see
    The beginning of
    Loving me with your fist...........

    Nevar/Lavette112

    I like to say if you are in a abusive relationship leave them before it is too late. This is not a true story for me, but something I was inspired to write about. Please the best thing you can do is get out for the only way for you to get out is in a PINE BOX! Abuse is never okay........​
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang really felt that one girl keep up the good works yeah an abusive relationship is dangerous stuff
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt all the hurt n' pain inside this abusive creation of da emotions flowing
    so many women going through this every day not sure if they gonna make
    it too see tomorrow .....wow!!!!
     
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    thas hardcore....wow
    nice write....

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Amazing how you crawled in somebody else's skin and an unfamiliar situation. I thought that was very powerful.
     
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