Black Poetry : Loving Dreams (Bidwhist & Queentswana collab)

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  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bidwhist

    Encapsuled in this moment in time
    Lifelong yearning for a future love
    With buoyant thoughts that are mine

    Holding steadfast to this dream
    Awaiting for that special day
    But is the wait to no avail?
    As this cherished love slips away

    From dusk to dawn and another day past
    Visions of paradise lights a desirous flame
    Sweet memories of you will always last
    And my love for you will still be the same

    In a slumber rest you still grace me with your presence
    But this allure is only in a dream
    Last night we float down desire's river
    And we sailed along the lover's stream

    The two of us raptured in joy and tasted pain
    Experienced days of sunshine and a few drizzles of rain
    Although we rise and fall but through it all
    True love for you forever remain

    Grasping for words to describe feeling the way I do
    Shameless that I still love you
    I always will, whatever it takes, only if you knew
    And I will cherish each moment, so precious and true

    As long as the Sun radiates the sky
    The moon glimmers in the distant night
    As long as the water rises with the tide
    And the stars still shine so bright
    I will always see heaven in your eyes


    Queentswana

    Allow me to release you, from a troubled mind
    I savor our love, both in and out of time.

    And no matter what your thoughts are...
    they have already ran through my mind,
    whatever was planted from this harvest fruit,
    is cherished, loved and divine.

    Gave me your heart, I bred it with mines...
    as for your soul, I took full control.

    Of course I'll slip, but only in your direction,
    couldn't think of a day, without your intense affection.

    My love, heaven was made with us in mind...
    remember we have loved each other...in and out of time.

    If this is a dream, don't wake me yet,
    do dreams get wet? or is this a inner thigh sweat?

    Our love will forever, grow way beyond measure,
    I found in you...my deepest treasure

    The oceans of life, flows in our favor
    bathing in sync...of each other's flavor

    When was the last time we showered in champagne?
    or made wild love, in the mist of rain?
    reaked passion on the bathroom sink...
    I felt like I was covered in mink.

    I can't promise, you'll never see the rain,
    but I can erase away all your past pain

    Replace it with sunshine in all it's delight
    slipping in and out of our dreams at night.

    Oh my dear love, there's no need to sigh,
    cause true love...never say good-bye
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I will always see heaven in your eyes .......BID

    Oh my dear love,there's no need to sigh
    cause true love.....Never say good bye .......Queent

    This collab takes warmth and lovin to a new level in motion
    poeticly at it's best .........i love this collabo y'all hit us wit..
     
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    Well now, this is romantic and heartwarming vibe, you two. And it's certainly true, true love, never dies. Enjoyed your collaboration, poets.
     
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    :DPowerfully potent passionate piece poetess and poet!
     
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    This was tyte...I can totally relate to this flow more that I care to mention at this time...But believe it was definitely felt...Great job, Bid & QT...Glad to see ya got ya "mojo" back, my QUEEN....
     
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    wow ... Sister Queen ... you got Brother Bid write'n poetry !!!!! :eeek:

    And doing it well ... Big Ups Yall ... :toast:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  7. queentswana

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    Rich...
    Thank you for always showing support & love
    Watz...
    Trying to keep up with you, only sharpen my skills ...glad you liked it ...thanks
    Blaklioness...
    Surely you know how they can bring the best out of ya, I had fun flowing with Bid, thanks for the love
     
  8. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Drizz,
    I can get down...but nothing can keep me there ...^5 it's all good...thanks

    Destee...
    Yeah, Bidwhist can drop the heat when he want to, just glad he took it easy on me...smh
    thanks for the love
     
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    Simply amazing,beautiful,romantic drop!
     
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    love the flo poet keep up the good work.
     
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