Black Poetry : Lovin You Slow

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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1- Boy,you know you make(me weak)
    You do things that make me stop(and think)
    Be with you in the morning(through supper time)
    Crying tears of love on my pillow cover
    Cheeks damp and wet soakin(the sheets)

    (Chorus)

    Help me Lord to get on my feet
    Boy,you know you show me(things I never knew before)
    Sitting here imagining (what life would be)
    Lovin you tender (so tender to me)
    Lovin you slow (praying the passion renders)
    Lovin you slowly (So that you will know)
    What you mean to me

    (Chorus)

    2- Want us to be (not just yet)
    Waiting for our chemistry to set(if you endure)
    You will come to close
    Suffering quietly (emotions built up inside)
    Finally we meet again (caressin the negative away)

    Bridge

    Lingering
    I fill you lingering in your past
    Want me to come closer
    I'll show ya a better way
    And I know ya(cause I chose ya)
    Inspite of this change

    Wanting to know you(intimately)
    Lovin you slow (definately)
    Lovin you slow (with endless measure)
    Takin to quiet extremes

    Repeat Chorus 4x's till fades

    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SINGING IN THE RAIN WIT THE ONE I LOVE
    FEEL SO FINE..........D~STORM YA A
    CLASS ACT....
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You

    Thank you Rich for peepin this one. Muchas Gracias.
    Desert STorm
     
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    a beautiful written song
    u got skillz sista
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you. Cindy I really appreciate your enthusiastic responses. That makes my day.
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you hunyluv I really appreciate your kind and gentle words.
    Always and Sincerly,
    Desert Storm
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yep...

    That's what I'm talkin' about DS...nice and slow!!!

    Diggin' ya instru"mentals" most def!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    What did I tell you

    It's number 1 hit. Your going to sell your songs or sing them one of these days! Bravo~~~~~ Nice!
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks again GQ you be there like a true friend. Thanks so much bro.
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    Thanks again GQ you be there like a true friend. Thanks so much bro.
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