Quiet Poetry Lounge : LOVIN U AT AN DISTANT SHORE

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Anchored in twisted rope
    where my soul caress hope
    finding at distant shore
    raptured intoxicating core

    How can i even show what i feel
    when my love is mainly in thrill
    in the bliss of your radiant shine
    these ocean of tears separates us still
    i so adore you , slowly my heart unfold
    unto thy Queen her essence of gold

    You became my point of direction
    i lace our exsistance in prefection
    allowing my heart this great compassion
    to give you sweet deep affection
    we spool in the distant shores

    The innocence of precious snuggles
    as i shield to protect , comfort
    a perfect woman i do not need
    just her heart of desires fulfill the need
    one i admire until eternity my beloved .
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cherish a good woman
    She will be there for a lifetime
    Beautiful Piece Poet
     
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    feeling this deep emotional poem flow on my rich.:kiss2:
     
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    Beautiful!!
     
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    Reads like the beginning of a beautiful love story. I feel like turning the pages to see if they ever cross that ocean of tears. This was quite touching.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let me thank each of you for the read and support
    tantrum , nevar , ibrahim , watz
    in the distant shore of tears that divide our love
    yet the soul send the spirit to touch and grasp
    by heart that we sail da sea .....Thank thee all
    Da $R
     
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    i'm still on this journey
    waving in the ocean of love
    at the distant shore of her
    someday somehow someway
    i will reach the bank of her heart
     
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