Black Poetry : LOVEY

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Eric Mitchell, Sep 29, 2005.

  1. Eric Mitchell

    Eric Mitchell Active Member MEMBER

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    I TRIED TO EXTINGUISH THE PASSION, BUT NOT WHEN IT FIRST SPARKED, AND CURIOSITY FED IT SMALL PIECES OF WHAT IF’S AND WHY NOT’S. I SAT IDLY BY AS INHIBITION LOST HIS WILL TO FIGHT AND ABANDONED HIS POST. SOON AFER THAT, LOVE WALKED IN, INSOLENT AND UNAFRAID, HE FANNED THE FLAMES. PASSION GREW. FEARFUL OF WHAT WAS TAKING PLACE, I BEGAN TO WRESTLE WITH LOVE. BUT LOVE WAS TOO STRONG AND I COULD NOT SUBDUE HIM. SENSATIONS UNFAMILIAR TO ME MADE ME AWKWARD AND THE ADVANTAGE WAS LOVES. HE LAUGHED AT MY EFFORTS. IN DESPERATION I ATTACKED PASSION’S FLAMES, STOMPING AND SWATTING, BELIEVING THAT I COULD GAIN CONTROL. LOVE CONTINUED TO LAUGH AS PASSION ENGULFED ME. HELP ME. I AM CONSUMED.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Passion does have a way of consuming us, even when we don't want it to. Many have been in this place, and you described the feeling very well.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    often it moves this way to a within state this was well done and expressed
    thank you for this one .......
     
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    The "Love Bug" done bit ya...didn't mean for it to get ya..
    when it come, you can't run, hide or fly.
    nice piece poet
     
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    enjoyed the flow......