Black Poetry : loveshort #4

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...foolish.

    i’m thinking of you tonight
    & in all actuality I have
    no right to permit my
    psyche to contInUoUS-ly
    conjure romantic similes
    of you&me being
    …we… together… as one…

    i have no business feeling
    anything that could
    possib-ly mean:
    You affect me
    in ways that may ultimate-ly
    lead to me offering you
    half of my heart…

    i’m thinking of you tonight
    & i shouldn’t be imagining
    what it would be like
    to have you for myself…

    (after all)
    i don’t even know your name.


    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved
     
  2. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey...you betta ask him(lol) nice scribe here...

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my name...
    allow me to explain

    oh, noble creature
    cast your wisdom upon me
    that i might know well
    the love of thee

    let me feel you

    let me revel in the softness
    of the gentleness of you
    ...graze
    in the shallows and depths of you
    that i might know well
    the heart of you

    as i stand
    in the soft light
    of your gentle caress
    ...the glow of you
    lighting my way into a tomorrow day
    where smiles abound
    and joy awaits once more

    please know that

    I FEEL YOU.:)
    in all your beautiful shorts.
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well dayuuum!!!!

    What did I tell you about thinkin' about strangers??? :lol:

    Tight short for sure BlakGurl!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  5. Aminata

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    Okay...

    we Must talk...soon!!! I need to get some recipes from you sis!!

    your loveshorts...on point!

    :toast:
    :heart:
     
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    sweet flo here!!
     
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    that was an irresistable offer but I must pass -too much love for the ryhme and I'll cheat on you everytime...
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DJ. thanks for the read... i think i will. :D

    BigHead. but i couldn't help myself. he spoke to
    me first!! :lol: thanks for the read. :heart:

    1tyme. thank you for stoppin' by. it's always a
    pleasure. :)

    Aminata. i know! i know! & i ain't forgot!! i owe
    you a conversation... & you g'on git it! relax man! itsallLove.

    Bro'Man CLawd! what offer?? besides... i already
    know your name!! hahaha... so... you know! :)

    B. hmmm... you are beautiful!! :) thank you for
    takin' the time... i said in your post that i miss your words
    so i sho' nuff appreciate you leavin' me somethin' extra
    behind ova heah!! hey! i wanna know your name... :D
     
  9. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liking these "Loveshorts"

    BE
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE thanks for takin' the time. :)
     
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