Black Poetry : loveshort #3

<condenses into a soldi and falls to the floor as rain>

Sunshyne, this is passion defined and illustrated in rhyme. I love the way you opened with a single word, then carried us beyond that...then pushed us past elegance of "…let me be the entity
inhabiting your
daytime/nighttime/foralltime
dreams…" to the straightforwardness of "i want to be the
only one you come for.".

Now that my friend is how you work words.
Very stimulating!
Love it!

<evaporates>
 

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